Monday, 14 November 2011

                Taxi ride- ext (outside night)

              LAURA
          (SPEAKING ON THE PHONE TO MUM,STICKS HER HAND OUT)
          And says taxi
          Taxi driver
          Opens the door (silently )
              LAURA
              (Gets in the taxi) and says take me to my house
              TAXI DIRVER
              (he
i have made my own scipt and made my characters name up .
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3 comments:

  1. MonahanMedia20 November 2011 at 09:47

    Aminata
    Well done for your first blog post.
    A great start to your script. You have used some of the correct alignment and formatting for the text. Make sure the SLUGLINEs are correct. They should always be INT (or EXT), LOCATION - DAY (or NIGHT) e.g EXT. BUS STOP - DAY
    Make sure you have your directions(the business) and the dialogue indented differently so that the reader can tell the difference between the two

    Well done so far. I look forward to seeing your completed work uploaded.

    Mr Monahan

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  2. Aminata21 November 2011 at 05:28

    thank you sir and yeah i will make at i use directions (the business) and the dialogue indented differently so that the reader can tell the difference the two


    sir this is the wrong one i posted another one ...... form aminata

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  3. MonahanMedia29 January 2012 at 06:43

    Aminata
    This is a good start…you still need to finish it though…
    Mr Monahan

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