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Newlyweds Katy Perry and Russell brand wedding was gate crashed by an angry tiger mean there was 300,000 events. There were 85 guests in the wedding. Brand spent thousand buying machli, a female Bengal tiger who lives in the Rathambhore national park where the pair wed at the weekend. Katy Perry and Russell brand spent the wedding day in India and they wanted to put the pictures on a British magazine called OK! But Katy Perry didn’t want put the pictures on the OOK magazine because she wanted to keep it privet between her and Russell. The pair made sure to have an authentic wedding procession known as the bharat where the groom and his relatives walked to wherever the bride is waiting. In the days before the celebration kicked off, the local store was asked to order 1,380 cans of soft drinks and 5,000 of mineral water.
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Brand, 35, proposed to Perry, 25, in India outside the Taj Mahal last December. The couple met at the MTV Video Music Awards in September 2009, where Brand was host. A spokesman for the couple said the wedding service was carried out by a friend of the Perry family. The National Park, which provided the backdrop for the wedding, is one of northern India's largest sanctuaries. Last week the singer used social networking site Twitter to appeal for privacy while she tied the knot. In the end, guests at the wedding - who included David Biddies, Jonathan Ross and David Williams - were treated to a safari before the ceremony itself, at which Brand and Perry exchanged gifts of a big cat and a baby elephant. Katy looked beautiful in a sari and henna in her hands. The venue was also decorated with designer lamps and flowers. Among other guests, two elephants were also part of the ceremony. Russell Brand has already started planning children with his would be wife, Katy Perry.161Russell Brand thinks he will be a very good father as he loves children. He confesses that even amidst his acting and work, whenever he had his friend’s children around, he would start playing with them and the kids too are very fond of him. Russell Brand now confesses by aminata this a katy perry and russell brands wedding a tiger was gatecrashed in the wedding ...
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