Monday, 14 November 2011

LILLY sits at the bus stop and watch the cars pass by, AMY comes and sits down next to her and she puts her head down.
              LILLY                                           what’s wrong why you are so upset?
              AMY
          I’m not upset.
            LILLY
    Then what’s up with your face fix it up    
              AMY
          It’s nothing man I’m just really tired                                     
                        LILLY
                    Don’t tell me nothing then because I know you very well and what ever happened you tell me so tell me what the matter AMY is.
                   AMY
                   Nothing is wrong LILLY                         
                   LILLY
You know me am gonna find out somehow so you better tell me now.

     AMY
Ok I will tell you then my boyfriend he cheated
     On me and I don’t know what to do anymore
          LILLY
See I told you that he was gonna cheat on you but you was too obsessed with him                                                       
              AMY
          I know but I didn’t know what was wrong with me                    at that time and that he would cheat
              LILLY
          If I was you I would just take him out of my head (angry)
              AMY
          I know your right.
LILLY 
          Do you wanna come to the party tomorrow it’s gonna be great fun and you will feel much better (hopefully)
          AMY
          Sure why not I will come.
          AMY
           Bye for now my bus is here so yeah.
           LILLY
          Ok bye AMY talk to you later.
     
i made my own script by making up the characters names and making up what the say in the scipt.
                                                                            
             
                                               
                         


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  2. Excellent work.
    MERIT
    Great script. You have used the correct formatting. You have used the right indents to show the difference between the action and the dialogue. All character names have been written in capitals and there are directions for the characters in brackets. 

To make this even better just make sure the alignment of the dialogue is correct - some of it is not in line and it could get confused with the action.


    Mr Monahan

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